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I am writing to you because I want the hairdresser position at Style Masters, as advertised on the Jobs Central website. Please find here my résumé.

I am really eager about the position because I am ambitious to reach the top of the profession, and Style Masters provides an opportunity to do this. I am hard-working, creative, and determined to be the best.

Look at my résumé, I have completed a Higher National Diploma course in Hairdressing at Longbridge Art and Design College. And, I have just completed a one-year apprenticeship at Murphy Shine Studios in LA, where I have worked with many celebrity clients. This has given me lots of experience of working in a high-pressure environment.